exzeta's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Hydrogen Bomb]

Spend effort

On your drawings.

lalaguy responds:

thanks?

[shoop da whoop]

I allready told you.

Dont use MS paint unless you are really good at it.

lalaguy responds:

ummmm this is awkward...

[the annoying orange]

Wow.

Best of your paintings, but not good enough.

lalaguy responds:

noooo, my best is my gohan vs cell. which you gave a 2.

[dbz gohan vs cell kamehameha]

Improve

Your anatomy.

lalaguy responds:

i have no idea what that is.

[The Atomic Bomb]

Looks more like a tree.

THE GOOD
- Could be a nice tree with the correct colors
THE BAD
dont use paint.
IMPROVE
Too much blank space.

lalaguy responds:

sorry but i disagree that it looks like a tree.

[painting of a blackberry storm]

2 much blank space

2 much blank space, and it could be improved.

lalaguy responds:

like how?

[guy whos bigger than his house]

Needs improvement.

You could add shading. And make it less square-ish. And it will be better.

lalaguy responds:

yeah, i know it's not the best. but squares are the only thing i can do without it being sloppy.

[rainbow circle]

...

This drawing makes me assume you are an 8 year old. nah thats an insult for them, sorry 8 year olds.

lalaguy responds:

suck my fat hairy cock

[me]

Seriously?

PROS
-The smiley on the bottom left corner

CONS
Everything else

IMPROVE
Eveything

You could at least have made it one color and then shade it, also dont use MS paint, unless its the windows seven MS paint...

juniorplayer responds:

lol i only dd cus i waz really bored as wit all my stuff ! i have rendering progam dat i dont understand otherwise id use dat