exzeta's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Hydrogen Bomb]

Spend effort

On your drawings.

lalaguy responds:

thanks?

[shoop da whoop]

I allready told you.

Dont use MS paint unless you are really good at it.

lalaguy responds:

ummmm this is awkward...

[the annoying orange]

Wow.

Best of your paintings, but not good enough.

lalaguy responds:

noooo, my best is my gohan vs cell. which you gave a 2.

[Happy V-Day]

Good

-Originality 9/10

Not too original character. But the dress is original at least for me.

-Colors 10/10

SWEET colors.

-Lines 10/10

I like the way you used those thick lines.

-Coloring/shading 9/10

Pretty good. For me good shading can make an almost excellent drawing.

-BONUS SCORING: TITS 7/10

I CAN HAZ MOAR TITS PLOX? Kidding, pretty good like that

TOTAL SCORE 9
APROX SCORE 9

[dbz gohan vs cell kamehameha]

Improve

Your anatomy.

lalaguy responds:

i have no idea what that is.

[The Atomic Bomb]

Looks more like a tree.

THE GOOD
- Could be a nice tree with the correct colors
THE BAD
dont use paint.
IMPROVE
Too much blank space.

lalaguy responds:

sorry but i disagree that it looks like a tree.

[painting of a blackberry storm]

2 much blank space

2 much blank space, and it could be improved.

lalaguy responds:

like how?

[Comick 1]

Good idea, bad execution

The drawing isnt THAT shitty but its not good either, but i liked the idea, pretty fun. You should fix your anatomy. And your english.

bocodamondo responds:

you got 100% right :p

[guy whos bigger than his house]

Needs improvement.

You could add shading. And make it less square-ish. And it will be better.

lalaguy responds:

yeah, i know it's not the best. but squares are the only thing i can do without it being sloppy.

[rainbow circle]

...

This drawing makes me assume you are an 8 year old. nah thats an insult for them, sorry 8 year olds.

lalaguy responds:

suck my fat hairy cock